Friday, January 25, 2008
Fires in the Bathroom QR Chapter 2
In chapter two of Fires in the Bathroom, a part that caught my attention was in the discussion about teachers and trust, specifically when a student mentioned about how he was asked to redo an assignment that a teacher had lost. This part caught my attention because I have had a similar event happen to me on a project that could not easily be redone and it is very frustrating because the teacher never admitted that they lost it. Teachers should take accountability for their actions and if they lose something that cannot be replaced the teacher should give the student credit for an assignment that goes missing.
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Good QR content. See comments on your chapter 1 posting for details you will want to pay attention to in future blog entries.
In the sentence that starts with "This part caught my attention" you start in past tense "I have had a similar event" and then switch to present tense "it is very frustrating". In the same sentence, you have a pronoun reference problem: you write "the teacher" (which is singular) "never admitted that they lost it" (they is plural). 3/5--mechanics and directions.
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